Film Score- Baraka

My first ever attempt at a film score.This is part of a film called 'Baraka'. I played and recorded whatever came into my head really. Messed around with different guitar tunings. I love the band Athlete. They use Reason (I think) and produce their music now. I think it’s brilliant. I used Pro Tools, re-wired Reason to Pro Tools and recorded all instruments myself. I'll admit it probably needs more melody, maybe some vocals and probably less instruments, it's a bit crowded. It's for a first ...