TRock- The Rain and the Storm

My attempt at Time lord Rock. I don’t own Doctor Who (I wish) But the poem is mine, and if anyone steals it, i will come after you. Be warned. So I really hope you like it, and if you do please comment. I'd really appreciate that. Poem: He stands on the windswept, tear stained land As the tears of the Gods join his own in the sand Lightning struck down from the bruised clouds above On the day that he mourned for the loss of his love Now the wind and the rain, and the ominent clouds may tear his flesh apart But never would they be able to touch the pain of his love in his hearts It hurt to remember, but even more to forget All the fun that theyd had since the day they first met An empty world filled with so much noise Was enough to drown out the pain of past joys Without her there should be no more laughter or joy Just an eternal moment of silence for this lost little boy But thats not how it works, the world doesnt end Just because a man wishes when he loses his friend They must always leave him, its always the way The time must come on some fateful day So many goodbyes, too many to count But it was she that held his respect in paramount But now she was gone in the march of time And the suns light through the clouds as it began its climb Seemed cruel and mocking, out of place As if it had brightness of her smile to replace The dark in his hearts and the cold in his soul The strength to take place of that which was stole He turned away from the sun that cracked the bruised clouds above On the day that he mourned for the loss of his love